Submission (#1072) Approved
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Prompt
Submitted
28 October 2024, 02:57:44 EDT (1 month ago)
Processed
4 November 2024, 23:57:33 EST (1 month ago) by applebabbles
Comments
Ingólfr entered Hades. Hope I did this right!
BREAKDOWN:
(Base) Words 3,251 | 813T [812.75 = 3251 multiplied by 0.25]
Characters/pets | 90T [Ingólfr Sveinn, Ophelia Yoshidae, Soradeatha Nausicaa and her birthday bug pet, Atum Serapis and his phoenix pet.]
Gift writing | 15T [Ophelia Yoshidae]
Backstory | 25T [In the beginning, Ingólfr is shown thinking back on the interactions and thoughts of the phims he holds close and how his decision of walking through the portal affects them. Small moments of when they all first meet is mentioned because Ingólfr is one to hold every interaction in high detail. He fears one day he might not remember those moments.]
Character development| 25T [From the very moment he was able to walk, his parents demand only the best from him and to worship the very ground the Weaver walks upon. In this little moment in time, Ingólfr is seen questioning that and how it all came to be this way. Ingólfr has always been observant and a bright minded hatchling, but his parents never allowed him to speak up on his thoughts. This caused him to always split his attention and have him have to shake his head to rid his thoughts countless times.]
Character arc | 25T Continued from <a href="https://toyhou.se/~literature/242059.it-roars-2024-ingolfr/2.12-the-murmur-path-of-stars/">THE MURMUR</a>. Ingólfr goes through the process of rethinking of his choice and how it affected those close to him. While remembering memories from so long ago, he falls and falls and falls to a place he's only ever heard whispers about. He does not know how to feel but he feels distraught and regretful regradless.]
Light dialogue | 10T
Standard effort | 1T
TOTAL: 1,004T
BREAKDOWN:
(Base) Words 3,251 | 813T [812.75 = 3251 multiplied by 0.25]
Characters/pets | 90T [Ingólfr Sveinn, Ophelia Yoshidae, Soradeatha Nausicaa and her birthday bug pet, Atum Serapis and his phoenix pet.]
Gift writing | 15T [Ophelia Yoshidae]
Backstory | 25T [In the beginning, Ingólfr is shown thinking back on the interactions and thoughts of the phims he holds close and how his decision of walking through the portal affects them. Small moments of when they all first meet is mentioned because Ingólfr is one to hold every interaction in high detail. He fears one day he might not remember those moments.]
Character development| 25T [From the very moment he was able to walk, his parents demand only the best from him and to worship the very ground the Weaver walks upon. In this little moment in time, Ingólfr is seen questioning that and how it all came to be this way. Ingólfr has always been observant and a bright minded hatchling, but his parents never allowed him to speak up on his thoughts. This caused him to always split his attention and have him have to shake his head to rid his thoughts countless times.]
Character arc | 25T Continued from <a href="https://toyhou.se/~literature/242059.it-roars-2024-ingolfr/2.12-the-murmur-path-of-stars/">THE MURMUR</a>. Ingólfr goes through the process of rethinking of his choice and how it affected those close to him. While remembering memories from so long ago, he falls and falls and falls to a place he's only ever heard whispers about. He does not know how to feel but he feels distraught and regretful regradless.]
Light dialogue | 10T
Standard effort | 1T
TOTAL: 1,004T
Skills
| Skill | Amount |
|---|
Criteria Rewards
Talon Writing Rewards - 933 
Wordcount:
3251
Characters/pets:
6
Gift Writing:
Off
Featured Character:
Off
Backstory:
Off
Character Development:
On
Character Arc:
On
Lore:
Off
Roleplay Bonus:
0
Dialogue:
Light Dialogue
Effort:
Standard Effort
2x Prompt Bonus:
Off
Rewards
| Reward | Amount |
|---|---|
| Cupid's Bow | 1 |
| Rising Crest | 3 |
| Riyal | 120 |
Characters
PHIM-056: Ingólfr, Crestfallen Admiral
| Reward | Amount |
|---|---|
| Weapon Experience Points (Currencies) | 2 |