Submission (#251) Approved

Breakdown:
1584w | 21t
Add. character: 3t (Includes many lines and descriptions of The Creature)
Char. development: 1t (Sebastian has always been a faithful follower, but in this writing, she begins having doubts about her loyalty and has to face those doubts throughout the writing)
Backstory: 1t (Briefly mentions (one paragraph) Sebastian's upbringing and her parents as this relates to her doubts and faith) (Feel free to remove this bonus if there isn't enough backstory mentioned!)
Light Dialogue: 1t
Lore 2t (Many mentions of The Weaver and how the world was created, as well as Eden and the Elysium in appearances)
Flourish: 12t (I wanted to put a lot of thought and effort into this writing since this is to be the writing that develops Sebastian as a character in order to begin her story in this world. This is, in essence, to be her "origin story". I began her time in the beginning intentionally as it relates to who she is later in the piece. She is contemplative, thoughtful, and never does anything brashly, yet she has these doubts that are conflicting with her intensely loyal nature. She balances these doubts throughout the writing. I wanted the writing to be very "in her head" and visually descriptive, so I tried my best to narrate as if it was from Sebastian's perspective and mindset, and as if the reader is "seeing" what she is seeing throughout this encounter.)

Total: 41t