Submission (#339) Approved
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Prompt
Submitted
13 June 2024, 18:45:46 EDT (5 months ago)
Processed
14 June 2024, 11:23:41 EDT (5 months ago) by applebabbles
Comments
(Hopefully I did this right, I read all your comments and the entire guide listing :p)
RIYAL BREAKDOWN:
(Base) Words 1178 | 15t
Additional Character | 3t
Light Dialogue | +1t
Character development | 1t (Ingólfr grew up to be a part of the ever-loving side of The Elysium but something deep down inside of him, through his veins and very bloodline refuses to sit idle and abandoned any longer. The Fallen calls to him like the moon to the great waves of an ocean.)
Backstory | 1t (A little bit of insight on how Ingólfr spends his days, and some light mentions of past interactions with others.)
Flourish | 9t (I thought very long and hard about how I wanted Ingólfr to be like and how his mind works. I researched many topics such as D&D aspects and all the classes on how they could make or break a character in the long run. With every new piece of information, I put together, I kept changing on how Ingólfr would be in my mind. Thankfully, I was able to get a good gist of info and inspiration to write out the first storyline prompt. I went from wanting him to be a fighter like Luffy or Naruto, but I settled on a Paladin that has broken their oath. This oath being everything to Ingólfr. From his every day to his future, Ingólfr would see this play out in a way that can set ablaze the fire inside of him.)
TOTAL: 30t
RIYAL BREAKDOWN:
(Base) Words 1178 | 15t
Additional Character | 3t
Light Dialogue | +1t
Character development | 1t (Ingólfr grew up to be a part of the ever-loving side of The Elysium but something deep down inside of him, through his veins and very bloodline refuses to sit idle and abandoned any longer. The Fallen calls to him like the moon to the great waves of an ocean.)
Backstory | 1t (A little bit of insight on how Ingólfr spends his days, and some light mentions of past interactions with others.)
Flourish | 9t (I thought very long and hard about how I wanted Ingólfr to be like and how his mind works. I researched many topics such as D&D aspects and all the classes on how they could make or break a character in the long run. With every new piece of information, I put together, I kept changing on how Ingólfr would be in my mind. Thankfully, I was able to get a good gist of info and inspiration to write out the first storyline prompt. I went from wanting him to be a fighter like Luffy or Naruto, but I settled on a Paladin that has broken their oath. This oath being everything to Ingólfr. From his every day to his future, Ingólfr would see this play out in a way that can set ablaze the fire inside of him.)
TOTAL: 30t
Skills
Skill | Amount |
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Rewards
Reward | Amount |
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Simple Torch | 1 |
Rising Crest | 3 |
Riyal | 10 |
Talons | 30 |
Characters
PHIM-056: Ingólfr, Crestfallen Admiral
Reward | Amount |
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Weapon Experience Points (Currencies) | 2 |