Submission (#500) Approved

722 Words; 722/75 = 9r
Heavy Dialogue +3r
Backstory +1r (unsure)
Additional Character x2 +2r (unsure)
Total: 15r

Heavy Dialogue; Most of this piece is written in Dialogue. Fuki and her father are arguing about her lack of appropriate effort.
Backstory; I'm not sure if this counts as a flashback or not. It is about Fuki's childhood, including a bit of her memory as a fresh baby and then later when she is near to her leaving her home.
Additional Character/Pet; They don't have names yet for plot reasons, but Fuki's parents are very significant to this prompt. Her mother is only mentioned in the first part, but her father is in most of it altogether.

Reward	Amount
Flame Breath	1
Rising Crest	1
Riyal	16